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Raunic 2.0

on 4/16/2016, 9:52 pm



RAUNIC 2.0
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Re: Raunic 2.0

on 4/16/2016, 10:26 pm
Alright, he's lookin a bit better. He can still be improved though:

The yellow shoes are a bit bright. It's fine if you want the shoes to be yellow but try a less saturated yellow so that it matches the gray tones of your character.

The 3 quills in the back and one quill in the front is kinda unoriginal but it's far better than him just being a copy of Sonic. Still, tho, I suggest trying to find areas where you can add a bit extra.

Also, try to think about why your character stands out from the rest of the Sonic characters. And then, why does your character stand out from the rest of the other fan characters? If you think about that, you may come up with some more features that you want to add to him.

Lastly, here are the rules regarding fan characters.

Try to give us a little more. Show us who Raunic is and why we should care about him as a character.
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Re: Raunic 2.0

on 4/16/2016, 10:28 pm
Isn't unoriginality the best policy :3

and k I will figure stuff out about Raunic
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Re: Raunic 2.0

on 4/17/2016, 1:47 am
try making the character look different compared to most hedgehog characters, Like Do something similar to silver. AND I MEANT TAKE AN IDEA FROM HIM, NOT STEAL HIS DESIGN.






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Re: Raunic 2.0

on 4/17/2016, 12:32 pm
I didnt steal his design...
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Re: Raunic 2.0

on 4/17/2016, 1:10 pm


Raunic 2.2
Better?


Last edited by SonicTFS on 4/17/2016, 2:53 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Re: Raunic 2.0

on 4/17/2016, 1:38 pm
He wasn't saying that you stole Silver's design. He was just telling you to look at his design for inspiration but to not steal his design.

Stealing his design would be if you tried to put the circles on Raunic's hands or used Silvers shoes on Raunic. He was only telling you to look at Silver and look at how he looks different from Sonic and Shadow and try to make Raunic look different from Silver, Sonic, and Shadow.

Also, do not double post. Double posting is when you make one post then make another post in less than a day and before anyone else has posted. If you have something else to add then use the edit button.


Also, he's looking a bit better but I think your shading might be off a bit.

Read this tutorial and try to re-shade Raunic.
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Re: Raunic 2.0

on 4/17/2016, 2:45 pm
Okay but do you still get notifited if I edit it?
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Re: Raunic 2.0

on 4/17/2016, 2:54 pm
Not sure what you mean by me getting notified but you still the mario cap that says there's been a new comment stays red because I still haven't seen your comment yet so it shows up as new to me even though you edited it.
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