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Sonic Vs Luffy IV

on 4/12/2014, 8:42 am
Hi everyone !
Sry for people who was waiting for my work...
but high-school come first !

so this is my work in progress !

UPDATE : http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/88fabf0c91bf1692839764cc47b89f8a

any advice ?


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Re: Sonic Vs Luffy IV

on 4/12/2014, 12:21 pm
Idk, I'm not expert and don't change until you got other views if you want to be sure.

But...I think the paralax was a bit too much here, but don't change it automatically, it may be just me.

The animation seemed decent though. Love the lighting effect at the end.


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Re: Sonic Vs Luffy IV

on 4/12/2014, 4:30 pm
Wow dude that was really awesome!

I thought the parallax was alright, maybe a little bit too much but only because when I animate, I use it a lot less. However having watched it a second time I think it's okay, it doesn't distract me that much.

As for the fighting I have nothing bad to say, it was all good, some attacks didn't feel like that had much of an impact but he was blocking.

The lighting... I have to agree with YoshiSonic here. Loved it, awesome touch to the animation, keep it up!

Also, adding the small clip with his eye was a really nice touch!


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Re: Sonic Vs Luffy IV

on 4/12/2014, 5:34 pm
It misses some sound effects , and some of the sound effects were a Little ''off of the place'' , but nothing more than that , very cool , keep it up , you should be able to find a fire sound effect for when Luffy uses the Red Hawk , and a fire effect for the Fist , because the one you used is good , but it can be better , anyway , This is all





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Re: Sonic Vs Luffy IV

on 4/12/2014, 5:36 pm
@Shady Shadow wrote:Wow dude that was really awesome!

I thought the parallax was alright, maybe a little bit too much but only because when I animate, I use it a lot less. However having watched it a second time I think it's okay, it doesn't distract me that much.

As for the fighting I have nothing bad to say, it was all good, some attacks didn't feel like that had much of an impact but he was blocking.

The lighting... I have to agree with YoshiSonic here. Loved them, awesome touch to the animation, keep it up!

Also, adding the small clip with his eye was a really nice touch!

Yeah, watched it a second time, it doesn't bother me THAT much, so I edited my view point.





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Re: Sonic Vs Luffy IV

on 4/13/2014, 1:50 pm





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Re: Sonic Vs Luffy IV

on 4/13/2014, 11:56 pm
Damn son you sick wit it : D
However some parts are just dragged on way to long causing your flow to just get lost
Examples would be when Sonic's eye moves its far to slow and Luffy's charging up way way way to slow
Just shorten out the long draw out moments and this animation will be even better





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Re: Sonic Vs Luffy IV

on 4/15/2014, 4:05 pm
Aside from the over parallax, you need to fix the skewing. Sometimes you kinda over stretch them man.
Otherwise awesome stuff!





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Re: Sonic Vs Luffy IV

on 4/16/2014, 3:06 am
I loved every second of it great job!
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