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Naruto vs Sasuke

on 3/23/2014, 6:16 am
http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/7ec5a5160b68952ed2dee69845baaaaf

First of all . I know it's not original , just trying my animation skills one more time

It don't haves sounds just the music

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on 3/23/2014, 8:09 am
Oh man Buch, you are gettin' better and better. I guess I can say you are better than me now, since I'm way less productive. I'll try things out soon.

I love the tone of this animation, you made it seem very serious.





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Re: Naruto vs Sasuke

on 3/23/2014, 8:35 am
@YoshiSonic wrote:Oh man Buch, you are gettin' better and better. I guess I can say you are better than me now, since I'm way less productive. I'll try things out soon.

I love the tone of this animation, you made it seem very serious.

Just doing something that I should have done a while ago , variety





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Re: Naruto vs Sasuke

on 3/23/2014, 8:48 am
alright, downloaded swf and played it frame by frame:

First off, tha tpillar naruto is on looks jpeggy as fuck. Might wanna fix that, then again it could be me. also, the ground below looks weird, probably because it's just kinda floating there while the trees...? trees below it are visible.

There are a lot of pauses which kill the mood of the fighting, there's a few hits and then they look at each other DRAMATICALLY again. When sasuke's running, we get that floating ground thing again, it just looks weird how it just cuts off at the bottom. When Naruto hits sasuke up in the air, he kind of goes forward a bit but then stops and just rises up in the air. When he falls it's like he's falling backwards. which, doesn't make a lot of sense.

That's all I could find so far.







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Re: Naruto vs Sasuke

on 3/23/2014, 9:14 am
If i see that fucking preloader one more fucking time. good fucking lord.
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Re: Naruto vs Sasuke

on 3/23/2014, 9:26 am
@SXR123 wrote:alright, downloaded swf and played it frame by frame:

First off, tha tpillar naruto is on looks jpeggy as fuck. Might wanna fix that, then again it could be me. also, the ground below looks weird, probably because it's just kinda floating there while the trees...? trees below it are visible.

There are a lot of pauses which kill the mood of the fighting, there's a few hits and then they look at each other DRAMATICALLY again. When sasuke's running, we get that floating ground thing again, it just looks weird how it just cuts off at the bottom. When Naruto hits sasuke up in the air, he kind of goes forward a bit but then stops and just rises up in the air. When he falls it's like he's falling backwards. which, doesn't make a lot of sense.

That's all I could find so far.

Yeah , my combat style is kinda stoped , Floating ground? lol , It cuts off at the bottom , got it , naruto hits sasuke in the air and when he falls he falls , XD , well nice critique anyway I'll take it.

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If i see that fucking preloader one more fucking time. good fucking lord.

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Re: Naruto vs Sasuke

on 3/24/2014, 10:48 am
Haven't seen A Naruto vs Sasuke in A while, it was stiffy as in the stop And go As SXR said but these seem like problems that can be fixed with Exp just keep Animating each time you do you will see more And more of you mistakes.





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Re: Naruto vs Sasuke

on 3/24/2014, 11:17 am
http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/f080bc34e27354a40b9a8433ce71792e
Fixed the floating ground thing ( thanks SXR , I didn't seen before ) about the pillar that naruto is on , It's PNG , I can do nothing with that





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Re: Naruto vs Sasuke

on 3/24/2014, 4:08 pm
Getting better, mate. c:





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Re: Naruto vs Sasuke

on 3/24/2014, 4:10 pm
@NS01 wrote:Getting better, mate. c:

Thank you mate c: , Still need to improve a lot more to be at a decent level...





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