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Re: Knuxy's Art Extravaganza

on 10/15/2013, 11:05 pm
the hand that's on our left is wonky.
face is cool but i think that the mouth could be moved further up. idk.

also, is her head supposed to be turning away from us? i feel it's kind of what you wanted to do (i am probably wrong), but idk :s
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Re: Knuxy's Art Extravaganza

on 10/15/2013, 11:11 pm
@Leo wrote:the hand that's on our left is wonky.
face is cool but i think that the mouth could be moved further up. idk.

also, is her head supposed to be turning away from us? i feel it's kind of what you wanted to do (i am probably wrong), but idk :s
When i sketch I just put in the basic shapes so i know what should be going, not an excuse for the hideous hand though lmao.
The mouth, i don't know whether i should move it up or not, it seems ok where it is, but we'll see when I get further in.
As for the face as a whole, yes it doesn't read too well. Her head is cocked away from us but shes looking in the other direction; i think if I make her looking at us and leave the face cocked to the side it should look better, we'll see.
thanks for the input bb
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Re: Knuxy's Art Extravaganza

on 10/15/2013, 11:30 pm
no problem, im always here 4 u
also, if you're trying to make her head go away, do something more like this
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Re: Knuxy's Art Extravaganza

on 10/15/2013, 11:43 pm
Figured it out.  Her head wasn't back far enough; there were some conflicts going on with the neck and back areas.  Also shes looking down, and it makes a bit more sense now, with some minor changes.

Also heres an outline of what her body is doing if you're interested in that.  Used it to fix the head issue lol.

(after looking at this for a bit longer now i see theres an issue with the shoulder to our left...)
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Re: Knuxy's Art Extravaganza

on 10/16/2013, 12:09 am
yeah, that does make more sense.
keep it up!
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Re: Knuxy's Art Extravaganza

on 10/16/2013, 4:25 pm
Slowly working my way down... its starting to come together now.  Dealing with a lot of folds in one place though lol  Hopefully they'll turn out right and won't give me too many issues.
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Re: Knuxy's Art Extravaganza

on 10/16/2013, 5:50 pm
I feel like her breasts are too far apart. Like, her right breast is just directly under here shoulder, which is kinda weird.







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Re: Knuxy's Art Extravaganza

on 10/17/2013, 9:34 pm
Fixed.
And yes I'm taking my sweet time on this, want it to look really good when I'm done.
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Re: Knuxy's Art Extravaganza

on 10/17/2013, 11:39 pm
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Re: Knuxy's Art Extravaganza

on 10/17/2013, 11:49 pm
yeah, now that i think of it, it seems like she's about to throw a fireball at us
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Re: Knuxy's Art Extravaganza

on 10/18/2013, 12:51 pm
...I'm strangely turned on by her
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Re: Knuxy's Art Extravaganza

on 10/18/2013, 6:13 pm
The shading contrasts the eyes, making her look psychotic. That turns me on.





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Re: Knuxy's Art Extravaganza

on 10/21/2013, 8:38 pm
Thanks for the positive reviews C:
Taking a break from zoey and messing with an older sketch of gaige
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Re: Knuxy's Art Extravaganza

on 10/21/2013, 8:58 pm
not that sure about that nose. and the thumb is missing a joint.

otherwise it's p cool
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Re: Knuxy's Art Extravaganza

on 10/21/2013, 9:39 pm
Maybe he didn't want the thumb to have a joint.

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Re: Knuxy's Art Extravaganza

on 10/21/2013, 9:50 pm
hey, at least i'm trying to give some feedback here.
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Re: Knuxy's Art Extravaganza

on 10/21/2013, 10:09 pm
In most cases (unless deformed) shouldn't the thumb cross over the ring finger or pinky when making the peace sign?





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Re: Knuxy's Art Extravaganza

on 10/21/2013, 10:22 pm
yeah, there's that too. it's usually over the ring finger, although i'm pretty sure most people can reach their pinky as well.
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Re: Knuxy's Art Extravaganza

on 10/27/2013, 6:41 pm
Finishing up my iron man suit

just finished this bitch
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Re: Knuxy's Art Extravaganza

on 10/27/2013, 7:14 pm
@Knux wrote:Finishing up my iron man suit

just finished this bitch
LOL , lmao ,YAAAAAAAAAAAAY affraid confused Sleep bom king lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! afro afro afro 

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Re: Knuxy's Art Extravaganza

on 10/27/2013, 9:02 pm
was expecting a drawing
wasn't disappointed anyway





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Re: Knuxy's Art Extravaganza

on 10/27/2013, 9:12 pm
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Re: Knuxy's Art Extravaganza

on 10/27/2013, 9:17 pm
Oh, you can have a drawing too c:
This is a WIP sketch. This one actually WILL get finished though. and soon.
(and thank you guys)
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Re: Knuxy's Art Extravaganza

on 10/27/2013, 9:33 pm
actually looks kinda cute (curse my heart)





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Re: Knuxy's Art Extravaganza

on 10/27/2013, 10:01 pm
gosh the girl is SO CUTE AAAAAAAAAA
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