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Jin fucking Neo Geo

on 10/23/2011, 4:14 pm


The most annoying fucking sprite on the bastarding planet.

I honestly don't know how the fuck Jayden does it...

I'd rather stick to JUS D:

Critique please.





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Re: Jin fucking Neo Geo

on 10/23/2011, 4:48 pm
Hmmm the hands I like but some how the torso feels weird but it looks great IMO

wait till Jayden gives his review I cant sprite for shiz





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Re: Jin fucking Neo Geo

on 10/23/2011, 5:31 pm
Lol cool. Yeah I'll wait for Jayden. He knows this shit.





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Re: Jin fucking Neo Geo

on 10/23/2011, 7:16 pm
Dem pants.
The whole form is off.





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Re: Jin fucking Neo Geo

on 10/23/2011, 7:29 pm
Oh ok than-

Oh wait you're not Jayden.





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Re: Jin fucking Neo Geo

on 10/23/2011, 7:49 pm
I forgot the part where who I was threw off the validity of my criticism.





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Re: Jin fucking Neo Geo

on 10/23/2011, 8:25 pm
'The whole form is off.'
Great criticism dat bro.





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Re: Jin fucking Neo Geo

on 10/24/2011, 1:20 am
hrmm it's not too bad. I think Jin Kazama's hair goes a little higher at the back from memory and then comes down on an angle. I don't know what's on his shoulder either...isn't Jin shirtless?
The legs and feet need the most work. I'd add more creased to the pants to distinguish whether his standing or crouching. I can't really tell atm. With the feet, add more toes. It looks like he has elephant feet.

I hope you keep editing this it could become great! : D
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Re: Jin fucking Neo Geo

on 10/24/2011, 5:28 am
Jin is supposed to be wearing a hoodie on this sprite lol. Yeah I'll try to make his hair a little higher and I'll sort the feet and legs out too Razz





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Re: Jin fucking Neo Geo

on 10/24/2011, 7:43 am
Is that supposed to be Jin from Tekken?
If soo, the back of his hair should be taller and more spikey.
The first arm on our right is small by like a pixel, and I'm not sure what you were going for with that hand.
His (our left) leg should be taller by a pixel.

Imo it's a great attempt though bro. =D

All sprites have alot of things in common, with that said you can sprite anything thrown at you.
Unless it's on it's own league like Maple and it's 8 tones of uselessness.
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Re: Jin fucking Neo Geo

on 10/25/2011, 4:15 pm
Mistah_Jayden wrote:
Unless it's on it's own league like Maple and it's 8 tones of uselessness.
This is the most useful sentence in that post.







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Re: Jin fucking Neo Geo

on 10/25/2011, 6:35 pm
LOL seems like you had some trouble with him...





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Re: Jin fucking Neo Geo

on 10/26/2011, 7:06 am
Face wrote:LOL seems like you had some trouble with him...

Yeah. I hate Neo Geo sprites, although they're ok to animate.

And thanks Jayden, I'll work on it some more.





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Re: Jin fucking Neo Geo

on 10/26/2011, 10:22 am
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Face wrote:LOL seems like you had some trouble with him...

Yeah. I hate Neo Geo sprites, although they're ok to animate.

And thanks Jayden, I'll work on it some more.

Do you mind if I make some edits when I get the time?





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Re: Jin fucking Neo Geo

on 10/27/2011, 2:23 am
Make edits of Jin? Or...?

If so, yeah sure Razz





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Re: Jin fucking Neo Geo

on 10/27/2011, 7:34 am
Yeah just make a few edits and possibly shade it. It might help you to improve on your spriting.





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Re: Jin fucking Neo Geo

on 10/27/2011, 4:23 pm
I think an issue with these sprites that you may not be used to is that you're used to adding some detail, in this case you don't need the detail, to retain the original, core style.







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Re: Jin fucking Neo Geo

on 10/27/2011, 4:26 pm
Yeah, Patt is right.

Here in Neo Geo style you have to pay wayyy more attention to the major forms than the small details.

Hierarchy man, hierarchy.
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Re: Jin fucking Neo Geo

on 10/27/2011, 4:31 pm
It is actually a reason why I can't really do it either, I try to add too much more and it ends up not matching. It is a problem that I've been trying to improve and I think I've gotten a bit better at it, but it takes a lot of discipline.







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Re: Jin fucking Neo Geo

on 10/27/2011, 4:34 pm
Patt wrote:It is actually a reason why I can't really do it either, I try to add too much more and it ends up not matching. It is a problem that I've been trying to improve and I think I've gotten a bit better at it, but it takes a lot of discipline.

Hierarchy.


Although I haven't mastered it too much myself.
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Re: Jin fucking Neo Geo

on 10/27/2011, 4:36 pm
That makes zero sense rofl.







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Re: Jin fucking Neo Geo

on 10/27/2011, 4:37 pm
How it makes no sense?
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Re: Jin fucking Neo Geo

on 10/27/2011, 4:39 pm
Hierarchy would refer to different subjects, like fine arts to a mural or of the liking. This case it is just reducing the amount of detail, I wouldn't consider it a complete different subject, beside the fact of the bit. I think if you were to compare perhaps something very defined to this it would be hierarchy. But it doesn't matter either way, just reduce your detail and try to keep it simple.







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Re: Jin fucking Neo Geo

on 10/27/2011, 4:43 pm
Yeah it is reducing the amount of detail but hierarchy can also help so much.

Work from major forms, then go adding details. Usually you can add up to 4 or more levels but I think that here only 1 level is needed or so.
This can be thought of as sculpting in spriting.

But not all people do this (I only know very few people who do this) so yeh.
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Re: Jin fucking Neo Geo

on 10/27/2011, 4:49 pm
I would agree, only one level would be needed, compare the sprites to the others and make sure it flows, as if you were to look at it and not even realize the sprite were custom. That would show how much it actually blends in with the sprite sheet.







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