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Pit Front View

on 10/14/2011, 7:17 pm
Well I got sort of lazy when making this, so I did a cheat method for creating front-view sprites.
And I know that's never a good idea, so I am in need of some criticism and what not.

This shows the individual steps so I know what not to do next time I try this cheat method.
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Re: Pit Front View

on 10/14/2011, 7:30 pm
Lmfao, this looks toooo choppy though.







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Re: Pit Front View

on 10/14/2011, 8:30 pm
Very insightful criticism bro.
That totally helps me :V





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Re: Pit Front View

on 10/14/2011, 9:13 pm
well at least make the legs abit straight thats all I gotta say :/





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Re: Pit Front View

on 10/14/2011, 9:25 pm
Well I mean it can be done, but it just looks weird, you'd have to custom a lot more to make it look well done.







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Re: Pit Front View

on 10/14/2011, 11:04 pm
It looks he's a bit fat to me.
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Re: Pit Front View

on 10/14/2011, 11:14 pm
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Jellal wrote:Well I got sort of lazy when making this, so I did a cheat method for creating front-view sprites.
And I know that's never a good idea, so I am in need of some criticism and what not.

This shows the individual steps so I know what not to do next time I try this cheat method.
What are the frames for? In the front view he doesn't have a torso or a shoulder. It goes from his neck straight to his bicep and his legs should be fixed since they're sorta opposite to each other making him look like some sort of crab. Then there are the poses where his legs are bent facing each other and the one with the like 3 legs.

You can do that method for a reference of how a front pose should look like but you should always remake a more serious version or edit another copy next to the original to make it look properly. I suggest you look up some frontal view anatomy drawings or something if u need any refs on how it should look.
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Re: Pit Front View

on 10/15/2011, 2:49 pm
Thanks for the criticism, Jayden.

How's this?





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Re: Pit Front View

on 10/15/2011, 5:22 pm
Looks alot better lol. make his torso a lil thinner since Pit isn't much a brolic person.
Other than that, I'd say some of the shading can be improved but it's better now.
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Re: Pit Front View

on 10/16/2011, 11:17 am
His facial expression is pretty weird too... :s







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Re: Pit Front View

on 10/16/2011, 11:18 am
Jellal wrote:Thanks for the criticism, Jayden.

How's this?

Looks like he just sat down to take a shit. or that he just got butt raped and he's feeling relieved that it's over.







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Re: Pit Front View

on 10/16/2011, 11:20 am
Oh another thing, you might not want to make him seem so symmetrical, no just stands there with their sword things like that.







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Re: Pit Front View

on 10/16/2011, 1:36 pm
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Jellal wrote:Thanks for the criticism, Jayden.

How's this?

Looks like he just sat down to take a shit. or that he just got butt raped and he's feeling relieved that it's over.
Or perhaps his eyes are closed and that's all there is to it.
Just a thought.
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Re: Pit Front View

on 10/16/2011, 3:51 pm
I know, t'waz a joke my friend.







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