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While I still have time

on 10/7/2013, 10:09 pm
I seem to have found of smidgen of time on my hands, so I decided to make a little sumsum for y'alls. Im rustier han the knees of a 92 year old robot prostitute, but heres an attempt to do something

http://www.filz.us/view/ef7a144f-945/

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Re: While I still have time

on 10/7/2013, 10:12 pm
there's not a lot to talk about actually
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Re: While I still have time

on 10/7/2013, 10:26 pm
@Leo wrote:there's not a lot to talk about actually
Idk, tips or whatnot. Something looks a bit off to me





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Re: While I still have time

on 10/8/2013, 1:48 am
First of all one thing I think looks off is the fire isn't moving in the foreground and the Vcam looks a little dodgy





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Re: While I still have time

on 10/8/2013, 9:13 am
1. Camera

The camera feels a little unnatural. I think it's because the movements are sudden and kind of jerky. Try to make the camera move a bit smoother.

2. Kaden's jump

When he goes into the air, he goes up and immediately comes back down. There is no real sense of gravity because he goes up and down at the same speed/velocity, at least that is how it looked. So try to make sure that he slows down as he reaches the top of his jump and speeds up as he begins to fall.
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Re: While I still have time

on 10/8/2013, 9:54 am
I agree with the jump, he kinda just floats. When people jump, there's a sharp ascent and quick descent while they stay in the air for just a second.







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Re: While I still have time

on 10/8/2013, 5:26 pm
...WHAT DID YOU DO TO KURBI!!???





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Re: While I still have time

on 10/8/2013, 6:01 pm
@Face wrote:...WHAT DID YOU DO TO KURBI!!???
I DONT KNOOOOOW, I WAS ONLY TRYING TO HELP Shocked 

Well, this should be locked and deleted/sent to unfinished since something came up and I no longer have enough time to defile my beloved anymore





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Re: While I still have time

on 10/8/2013, 7:01 pm
DONE AND DONE!





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