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Mario vs Wall (WIP)

on 8/24/2013, 6:05 pm
http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/0fa217703b8e8db8e121649aea8155ff

It's not awesome , anyway this is in progress , you can review all what you want Wink





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Re: Mario vs Wall (WIP)

on 8/24/2013, 6:39 pm
Let me just say this...speed it up.
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Re: Mario vs Wall (WIP)

on 8/24/2013, 6:49 pm
@Realm Guardians Stride wrote:Let me just say this...speed it up.
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I'm not going to do that , I'm going to redo it , (too smbz influence)





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Re: Mario vs Wall (WIP)

on 8/24/2013, 6:52 pm
If i could say anything, I'd just say do some more interesting camera work and make mario a lot less static





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Re: Mario vs Wall (WIP)

on 8/24/2013, 7:45 pm
1.Well, the set up for the attack is way too slow.

2.The V-Cam shifts too fast right after Mario turns to Fire Mario

3. That fire effect looks weird, change it to something less...fiery or at least downsize it to an extent.

Since your going to redo this, I bid you good luck.





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Re: Mario vs Wall (WIP)

on 8/25/2013, 2:10 am
i'm really tired right now so all i can say that about the fire effect that once you put the effect after the fire ball it looks a little weird, maybe put it before the fire ball, or just don't put it..and instead make the fireball glow, add him a little effect that will blend nicley on him or something like that.





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Re: Mario vs Wall (WIP)

on 8/25/2013, 5:14 am
just i'm not going to fix all what you are saying because i'm re doing it.

and this is only my 3rd flash in progress





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Re: Mario vs Wall (WIP)

on 8/25/2013, 5:25 am
IT BETTER BE SUPER AMAZING, IF IT WON'T LOOK LIKE A PIXAR MOVIE I'LL BE VERY DISAPPOINTED....AND STUFF...





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Re: Mario vs Wall (WIP)

on 8/25/2013, 5:28 am
@Tal wrote:IT BETTER BE SUPER AMAZING, IF IT WON'T LOOK LIKE A PIXAR MOVIE I'LL BE VERY DISAPPOINTED....AND STUFF...
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Re: Mario vs Wall (WIP)

on 8/25/2013, 7:32 am
dude sarcasm, just do your best and enjoy what you do Very Happy





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Re: Mario vs Wall (WIP)

on 8/25/2013, 1:22 pm
@Tal wrote:dude sarcasm, just do your best and enjoy what you do Very Happy
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