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on 8/15/2013, 1:07 pm


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Re: WIP Animation (It's a secret Shhhhh!)

on 8/15/2013, 3:26 pm
When Joey jumps , It's just a Little false , going at that velocity it's impossible to reach that distance he should reach the double or triple another fail than that nothing , the sprites were well , the backrounds were well , and the fps were well.

So just change the distance that Joey jumps and that will do it more realistic Wink





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on 8/15/2013, 3:56 pm
When he was running down the side of the building, his impact was... well it was kind of lack luster.

I don't think he's going for realism Buch, I mean, it's a kirby running down the side of a building, it doesn't get anymore non realistic than that.







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Re: WIP Animation (It's a secret Shhhhh!)

on 8/15/2013, 4:06 pm
@SXR123 wrote:When he was running down the side of the building, his impact was... well it was kind of lack luster.

I don't think he's going for realism Buch, I mean, it's a kirby running down the side of a building, it doesn't get anymore non realistic than that.
Yeah but i mean something like this :

If he is running at 100 km/h then he should just jump like 2 or 3 km not 20 m





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Re: WIP Animation (It's a secret Shhhhh!)

on 8/15/2013, 6:05 pm
@BuchonlxD wrote:If he is running at 100 km/h then he should just jump like 2 or 3 km not 20 m
@SXR123 wrote:I don't think he's going for realism Buch, I mean, it's a kirby running down the side of a building, it doesn't get anymore non realistic than that.







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on 8/15/2013, 6:56 pm
lol ok i can make the distance a little longer but damn out of all the views no one else can critique?





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on 8/15/2013, 9:02 pm
i agree with dave, when he landed on the ground it lacked impact. it seems very weak.

otherwise it's really nice
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on 8/15/2013, 10:15 pm
@Leo wrote:i agree with dave, when he landed on the ground it lacked impact. it seems very weak.

otherwise it's really nice
I know i need to add to when he lands on the ground, you know what ill just do that now and fix tha jump then i'll update





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on 8/16/2013, 1:34 am
that's better, but the movement on the little rocks flying was wind of weird.
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Re: WIP Animation (It's a secret Shhhhh!)

on 8/16/2013, 5:07 am
That updated version is more better , The distance was good now and the impact in the ground was more good than the old. Epicness!





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on 8/16/2013, 11:20 am
@Leo wrote:that's better, but the movement on the little rocks flying was wind of weird.
How so? I honestly dnt think there's anything wrong





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on 8/16/2013, 12:01 pm
Leo's right, the rocks kind of just... stop. There's no easing. They fly, hit the ground, roll and stop without any kind of decrease in movement.







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on 8/16/2013, 12:23 pm
@SXR123 wrote:Leo's right, the rocks kind of just... stop. There's no easing. They fly, hit the ground, roll and stop without any kind of decrease in movement.
I just tested it out it doesn't look right, rocks don't slide on the floor they're ridged so they roll and suddenly stop but i can still see if i can make this work out

Edit - I fixed it imo it looks a little better but i didnt put an update for it, unless you guys wanna see it





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Re: WIP Animation (It's a secret Shhhhh!)

on 8/16/2013, 1:44 pm
I think the update is better but I think there needs to be MORE indication of speed when Jodie's falling.
cause now it just looks like he hovers to the ground and it just smashes under his weight.





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on 8/16/2013, 3:33 pm
@dabestbrawler wrote:
@Leo wrote:that's better, but the movement on the little rocks flying was wind of weird.
How so? I honestly dnt think there's anything wrong
the movement doesn't look organic, it's pretty stiff
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on 8/20/2013, 11:17 pm
@Havoctacious wrote:I think the update is better but I think there needs to be MORE indication of speed when Jodie's falling.
cause now it just looks like he hovers to the ground and it just smashes under his weight.
umm.... there was more than 1 ova of Air gear? excuse me =w=
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on 8/21/2013, 1:22 am
the start, before he lands on the building was a little weird, it seemed eased wrong and mroe like he's floating (unless that was your intention) ofc i really don't care much about in animations about pyshics as long as the animation looks good, and you my friend, have made a good looking animation :3





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on 8/21/2013, 4:55 am
@Tal wrote:the start, before he lands on the building was a little weird, it seemed eased wrong and mroe like he's floating (unless that was your intention) ofc i really don't care much about in animations about pyshics as long as the animation looks good, and you my friend, have made a good looking animation :3
When he was floating at the building it was his intention i think , probably to add more epicness.





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on 8/21/2013, 5:52 am
@BuchonlxD wrote:
@Tal wrote:the start, before he lands on the building was a little weird, it seemed eased wrong and mroe like he's floating (unless that was your intention) ofc i really don't care much about in animations about pyshics as long as the animation looks good, and you my friend, have made a good looking animation :3
When he was floating at the building it was his intention i think , probably to add more epicness.
or this kirby is made out of helium, just.sayin'.





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on 8/26/2013, 5:32 pm
you should make him jiggle a bit when he hits the ground. in every game kirby's in he bounces a bit when he lands on the ground and yeah.



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on 8/26/2013, 10:13 pm
wow, i don't know how i didn't see this before but this is really awesome. keep up the great work





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on 8/27/2013, 3:33 am
when he leaps off it looks wierd to me. it'slike he's just floating down while going really fast forward and then the ground breaks. I mean yeah that's probably how it should look considering the speed of his jump but idk.





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on 8/27/2013, 7:32 am
Dbb, i like ur kind of choosing of music!!

What do u search to find great music like those u use on ur anim?

And what the name of the one u used on this anim?





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on 8/27/2013, 12:12 pm
when he jumps off the building, he is going at a diagonal direction, so when he lands, you should make jodie slide slightly, since he is going very fast. second of all, that landing needs to have much more impact. Maybe have that crater slightly in a directional aspect, sorta like this:

This is the landing i did for a part for the hacky sack collab. Since koopflame is going very fast, his landing has a lot more impact than a normal jump from a high distance and at a fast speed. There are much more rocks in the air and all over the place and I made a dust explosion because of the impact. You should think about adding more "impact" effects when a character if falling really fast and has a massive impact landing.
http://www.filz.us/Tvy

Here is the actual part in the whole callab part:
http://www.filz.us/view/e55b5894-0e4/

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on 8/27/2013, 2:40 pm
I think it the update is good guys...Seriously, it's just a landing, and he said he already fixed it to "HIS" liking with the help of some people, but he didn't update it yet. Let him progress further.





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