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Boondocks:Huey vs Riley

on 2/5/2013, 10:02 am
EDIT 2!!!
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Gonna finish off some movements, maybe 2 types of angles and add in the VCAM. afro


Last edited by Mranimator15 on 2/16/2013, 12:02 pm; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : ADDED MORE NAO!)
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Re: Boondocks:Huey vs Riley

on 2/5/2013, 1:59 pm
Here's a little suggestion for future references

It would be best if you held off on posting incomplete flashes such as this when so little is done. I'm not saying you have too, but it would be better for people who watch it. I'd say maybe twenty seconds or so should be done before posting it. Like I said, i'm not saying you have to, but it would be better for people watching

anyway, since i'm not too experienced in stick animation I can't give a lot of good critique, what I can say is that this is very smooth and even though I haven't seen the show, I know who the characters you are animating. I like it so far, and I hope to see more soon.







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Re: Boondocks:Huey vs Riley

on 2/6/2013, 2:50 pm
*saves the day*
dont worry SXR! I'll CNC

goods:

very detailed BG, love it
the anticipation seems pretty good

imrovements/suggestions:
when riley pulls out the gun, maybe add an angle to it
the force is not much, add more foooooorrrce young animator!
sticks look wobbly, if this is a project, i suggest using line

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Re: Boondocks:Huey vs Riley

on 2/6/2013, 4:02 pm
SOO far so good on the Cnc

ssb show me the part where it wobbles and ill refine it, cause i cant see it.
Force will be added after i finished the first scene so this is finished now but gonna be added with force.

This animation is a short fan made.
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Re: Boondocks:Huey vs Riley

on 2/6/2013, 5:54 pm
been seeing a lot of stick animations around here lately.
it looks good, but it seems a bit slow
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Re: Boondocks:Huey vs Riley

on 2/7/2013, 10:36 am
Hey, not everything can or should be face paste.
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Re: Boondocks:Huey vs Riley

on 2/8/2013, 8:46 am
@Mranimator15 wrote:Hey, not everything can or should be face paste.
I don't mean it needs to be going lightning fast, the motions just look like they're dragging on for too long, like the characters are really heavy or something
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Re: Boondocks:Huey vs Riley

on 2/8/2013, 12:41 pm
OH, naaaa basically am trying to make both of the characters fight how they usually fight from the series, then reinact in a realistic way if you get what i mean.
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Re: Boondocks:Huey vs Riley

on 2/8/2013, 12:55 pm
Lmfao. Great idea. I'm a fan of the Boondocks. You have a showcase of great stuff here. Fluidity, change in perspective, and impact from attacks. It's very good. Put some more sounds in the animation and keep going.






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Re: Boondocks:Huey vs Riley

on 2/16/2013, 12:03 pm
Thanks, almost finished and it should be out by next week.
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Re: Boondocks:Huey vs Riley

on 2/23/2013, 1:28 pm
Good!! I'm glad we got to help you out, especially supersmashbro, my bro ^ ^






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