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Luffy vs Sanji time skip

on 1/18/2013, 6:11 pm
so for see my animation go on my deviantart i cant give a link beceause im new member
my deviantart is : superluigi7900mugen

please say if its good or no Dance





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Re: Luffy vs Sanji time skip

on 1/18/2013, 10:26 pm
Uh..........
For those that can't see it

http://superluigi7900mugen.deviantart.com/art/Luffy-vs-sanji-time-skip-preview-1-animation-flash-349218437

There's actually a lot wrong with it. By FPS do you mean how many frames you've done?
500 FPS isn't even.. it stands for Frames per second. Keep it at 20/25 or 30, depending on what you're comfortable using.
The skewing, the camera, everything isn't sized properly and it looks distorted half the time.







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Re: Luffy vs Sanji time skip

on 1/19/2013, 12:22 am
i strongly agree with jayden, i also think that the v-cam was a little too zoomed in certain moments...and the skewing is overdone most of the time.





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Re: Luffy vs Sanji time skip

on 1/19/2013, 2:47 am
ok thx !naw i see the problem is the v-cam so its zoomed a lot;

THX Surprised


so yeah fps for me its the frames





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Re: Luffy vs Sanji time skip

on 1/19/2013, 8:34 am
sorry for double post but i update naw in deviantart

luffy vs sanji time skip preview 2

please go look in deviantart cant post link !





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Re: Luffy vs Sanji time skip

on 1/19/2013, 9:17 am
It still looks weird.
Try lowing down the FPS (feets per second) or adding some more frames in Sanji's idle etc.
The skewing isn't well done, try not adding skewing, it doesn't look good in every movement they do.
Your V-Cam looks strange i guess it had a different seizure than the window of the animation (man I don't know the name >:V ) and you tried to resize it directly no? That's not the way, try resizing the viewfinder to the size of the window. And make the BG bigger, i'm sure i saw the BG repeated at the right of Sanji. Press the Background and press this buttons:

Do all these and it will clearly look way better.
Hope this helped you.





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Re: Luffy vs Sanji time skip

on 1/19/2013, 9:25 am
thx :) but i not use skewing...





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Re: Luffy vs Sanji time skip

on 1/19/2013, 9:34 am
Yes you did
This movement Means Skewing:

But hey, no worries, I know you're not English. You'll get used to the names of all this in its moment





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Re: Luffy vs Sanji time skip

on 1/19/2013, 9:36 am
oh its that skewing?ok naw i see thx Dance





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Re: Luffy vs Sanji time skip

on 1/19/2013, 1:59 pm
I think you tried to make it as if it was an Anime.
The way you made Luffy's reaction to Sanji's diable Janbe just reminded me of Anime.
I mean Its not a bad thing.
Your Skewing doesn't look right either, try adding some slides too,
When the characters are standing, make sure each pose is 2 frames long, otherwise it looks a little bit fast, try to avoid pauses in your animation and keep the flow going.





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Re: Luffy vs Sanji time skip

on 1/19/2013, 2:46 pm
yeah like the anime ^^
ok thx for critic^^





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Re: Luffy vs Sanji time skip

on 1/19/2013, 3:23 pm
As many other have said, the animation has a lot, and I mean a lot of flaws.

Firstly, the v-cam is zoomed in way too much, like, a tremendous amount. You should try and try to capture more of the background and the area around the character, so that we can some room to look around, and not feel too over focused. Also, this attempt at skewing is, and I'm sorry to say this, but disgusting. These movements should actually be done fast, and it's best done frame by frame, meaning, don't use the tweening, just try and customize it yourself, taking advantage of the skewing and what not.

Overall, I mean it was an mediocre attempt, and there's a lot of work to be done, but.. yeah.







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Re: Luffy vs Sanji time skip

on 1/21/2013, 10:11 am
@Patt wrote:As many other have said, the animation has a lot, and I mean a lot of flaws.
really a lot?

Firstly, the v-cam is zoomed in way too much, like, a tremendous amount.
yes you right x)
You should try and try to capture more of the background and the area around the character, so that we can some room to look around, and not feel too over focused.
okay!
Also, this attempt at skewing is, and I'm sorry to say this, but disgusting.
you not need to say sorry you right i not see how to skewing
These movements should actually be done fast, and it's best done frame by frame, meaning, don't use the tweening
?what i not use tweening and i see what is it and the fps is 15....
just try and customize it yourself, taking advantage of the skewing and what not.
okay :)

Overall, I mean it was an mediocre attempt, and there's a lot of work to be done, but.. yeah.

so you want to say its very very very bad...?

so thx for the critic cheers



edit:go in my deviantart cant post link i have a test with a new effect ^^





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Re: Luffy vs Sanji time skip

on 1/23/2013, 6:18 am
new test effect:






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Re: Luffy vs Sanji time skip

on 1/25/2013, 3:57 pm
can admin or mod move this with sonic vs megaman in unfinished animation?( i go to continue them later) naw i start a other animation i not see why...





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Re: Luffy vs Sanji time skip

on 1/25/2013, 3:59 pm
d'alright then. moved.







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Re: Luffy vs Sanji time skip

on 1/25/2013, 4:00 pm
ok thx^^





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Re: Luffy vs Sanji time skip

on 1/26/2013, 7:02 am
Hey guys I wuz wondering how u got that spritas loading page that looks awesome!
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Re: Luffy vs Sanji time skip

on 1/26/2013, 7:11 am
@STHBallZ wrote:Hey guys I wuz wondering how u got that spritas loading page that looks awesome!

in google search: The Spritas preloader ^^





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Re: Luffy vs Sanji time skip

on 1/27/2013, 5:40 pm
@Super Deluxe wrote:
@STHBallZ wrote:Hey guys I wuz wondering how u got that spritas loading page that looks awesome!

in google search: The Spritas preloader ^^

Saved my as agin SuperDeluxe thnk u so much Surprised





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Re: Luffy vs Sanji time skip

on 1/27/2013, 7:28 pm
@STHBallZ wrote:Hey guys I wuz wondering how u got that spritas loading page that looks awesome!
DarkZero, a former animator and admin made it.







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