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Harpuia takes flight

on 7/14/2012, 3:07 pm
Just a little vid I was working on as a test

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/ef04431b0df277eca9d6d837f21513a2
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Re: Harpuia takes flight

on 7/14/2012, 3:08 pm
his movements in the sky look kinda weird, add ease to them +100





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Re: Harpuia takes flight

on 7/14/2012, 3:14 pm
@Tal wrote:his movements in the sky look kinda weird, add ease to them +100

alright anything else
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Re: Harpuia takes flight

on 7/14/2012, 3:24 pm
well i can talk for ages now, but work on that first.
there's always room for improvements though





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Re: Harpuia takes flight

on 7/14/2012, 7:36 pm
When he's flying it all looks so...boring, try to add like a blur behind him or some alpha images even, he looks so weird just...flying lol
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Re: Harpuia takes flight

on 7/15/2012, 2:34 am
^ that's what i'm talking about.

actually maybe instead of this slow flying make him fly really fast, like reloaded said, with blur.
cause it really looks boring and bad animated. you gotta put some more camera movements something that will make the one who watches it feel like he's in the animation.





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Re: Harpuia takes flight

on 7/15/2012, 11:32 am
I liked it but u must please give some kind of effect to his flight its seems so bland but good job






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Re: Harpuia takes flight

on 7/15/2012, 2:34 pm
Search for sound effects other than DBZ. Seriously. Simply typing in "sound" on Sprite Database will give you giant heap of all the sounds you will ever need.

Also, the sound clips in that seemed cut off.





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