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PostSubject: Art - of a simplier kind   Sun Aug 21, 2011 9:26 pm

Well, the gallery mod is having issues with the gallery. It tells me the image I uploaded is too big when I hadn't upload an image at all

so I'll dump some shit here


This one is okay, nothing special

The lines on this one are really bad but I like the perspective

I loved the way this one came out, especially since know nothing about highlights...

not that I know much about shading...



Anyway... thoughts? I'm hoping for a big speech from patt.
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PostSubject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind   Sun Aug 21, 2011 9:57 pm

What is this i don't even

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PostSubject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind   Sun Aug 21, 2011 10:27 pm

I personally love this very simplistic type of art. Art doesn't need crazy details to make it enjoyable to the human eye. Art appeals to anyone, and I mean anyone, and this type here, I find cool and very fun to draw. However I can't get this cartoony look, as I'm most impressed by the face in the last one. Each of these are unique in their own way, and each have their flaws that were fixed upon approach each one.

First drawing is very simplistic. Appearing to be a black figure with a gray face, the only thing I think that could make the picture better was if the eyes were bloodshot. That would have made it prime and probably the best here. The only things I don't like about it is the too simplistic shape, the can like shape with every ridged arms and legs. Fingers as well. However, this may just be the characters. The facial expression of the character really does fit him as well. Looking quite nice.

The second one, looks like a coffee cup of some sort. Once again with the unique cartoony look and nice drawing style. The body isn't ridged anymore. the cup shape looks excellent but it seems too short which isn't a problem, just I don't think it should be that short. The one thing I found wrong here was the arm placement in coordination of the up. I think it looks weird for where it is at. The thing I don't like here is the sprinkle like things in the brown (coffee?), it seems too out of place. Almost like confetti or something, should have made it a light brown and make it look like a yummy French Vanilla coffee. Although, still great drawing.

Ah this one, my favorite. The facial expression here really gets me. Looks so cute, harmless and innocent. Very nice eyes as well to achieve that look. The arm that is visible is perfect in every which way. The one thin that was in the previous picture but wasn't as great, is the shading/lighting. The light green here is so perfect, and it's just perfect, I can't say more. Perfect shade, perfect placement perfect everything. The only thing you should have included is dark green around the bottom. This here, is great, it's my favorite.

As I've said, the drawings are awesome, in their own ways. You improved with each as well. I really like this style and I think you could get really good if you continued with it. Continue to practice on and on to hit your true strength. Please, update this whenever possible. I love these drawings. : )

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PostSubject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind   Sun Aug 21, 2011 11:03 pm

There's the Patt i know, wall o texts all the way <3

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PostSubject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind   Mon Aug 22, 2011 4:20 am

Goddamn Patt-- over something traditional and classic as something of art?

YES!
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PostSubject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind   Mon Aug 22, 2011 2:01 pm

Well as a cartoon lover I should give my two cents too.

Your stuff is really well constructed, something I barely see nowadays (today it's just flat flat flat) but yeh

Your hands really need work. The hands weren't constructed so well and they look very wonky. If you haven't already, check out a book called Advanced Animation by Preston Blair. DO IT

There's lots of poses of hands you can try to draw.

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PostSubject: ha nice   Mon Aug 22, 2011 2:19 pm

i enjoy watching those drawings
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PostSubject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind   Mon Aug 22, 2011 4:46 pm

They are cool, aren't they. ^^

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PostSubject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind   Mon Aug 22, 2011 8:15 pm

These drawings are people from a flash crew, the first one is a ninja-can, second taco soup.

Yeah third one is the best patt, I agree with pretty much everything you said

Something I did earlier,

Everything turned out pretty good except the arms... meh
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PostSubject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind   Mon Aug 22, 2011 8:16 pm

Rofl that's excellent. But the left leg and the arms... :S

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PostSubject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind   Mon Aug 22, 2011 8:22 pm

yeah... I agree...

I just added that I agree so this wouldn't be spam lol
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PostSubject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind   Mon Aug 22, 2011 9:08 pm

Aren't you a slick fellow.

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PostSubject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind   Sat Nov 12, 2011 12:12 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind   Sat Nov 12, 2011 12:33 pm

Nice.
However his left hand has some tangents in it, so I recommend doing some overlap with the fingers.

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Gates to Infinity was literally released very recently and is also a mystery dungeon game
It says the word "Height". idc if height means length to you, where I come from height means height, this is a forum, this is a forum post, you have boobs.
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PostSubject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind   Sat Nov 12, 2011 12:34 pm

Granadico wrote:
What is this i don't even


I hate that phrase ;'(
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PostSubject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind   Sat Nov 12, 2011 1:48 pm

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Granadico wrote:
What is this i don't even


I hate that phrase ;'(


WHAT ISH DISH I DUN EVEN

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PostSubject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind   Sat Nov 12, 2011 1:50 pm

that facial expression is amazing, its so sinister and "ima rape you in the arse" type

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PostSubject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind   Sat Nov 12, 2011 2:16 pm

You wanna see great facial expressions?


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PostSubject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind   Sat Nov 12, 2011 3:31 pm

^ LAWL!! ... LMFAO wow that is funny.




TImMY!!!!! WOOT!! MY NIGGA Very Happy!! y u aint on so much


anywhore, that is cool. Cool. The hand is fairly good.
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PostSubject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind   Sun Nov 13, 2011 4:09 pm

I see how you added that slight shadow of the bug, but I feel like you should add the shadow of the hand as well to top it off. Otherwise I think it's nice. : )

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PostSubject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind   Wed Nov 23, 2011 6:36 pm

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I see how you added that slight shadow of the bug, but I feel like you should add the shadow of the hand as well to top it off. Otherwise I think it's nice. : )


I was going to, but I couldn't seem to get the angle

he saw nyan



in this next on I forgot to shade under the "hair" and lost the Photoshop document

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PostSubject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind   Wed Nov 23, 2011 6:59 pm

Well done. ^^

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PostSubject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind   Wed Nov 23, 2011 6:59 pm

For some reason, the eye lashes on the second drawing aren't following the major forms of the eyes.

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PostSubject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind   Sat Dec 17, 2011 9:24 pm



work in progress

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PostSubject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind   Sat Dec 17, 2011 9:35 pm

^^ lol nice

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