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Timmy Elementary Spritan Lv 1


Number of posts: 1184 Age: 15 Location: Windsor Ontario, Canada NewGrounds Username: tehtimmy4080 Registration date: 2010-11-08
 | Subject: Art - of a simplier kind Sun Aug 21, 2011 9:26 pm | |
| Well, the gallery mod is having issues with the gallery. It tells me the image I uploaded is too big when I hadn't upload an image at all so I'll dump some shit here  This one is okay, nothing special  The lines on this one are really bad but I like the perspective  I loved the way this one came out, especially since know nothing about highlights... not that I know much about shading... Anyway... thoughts? I'm hoping for a big speech from patt. |
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Granadico Administrator


Number of posts: 10716 Age: 17 Location: On the computer YouTube Username: Granadico NewGrounds Username: N/A DeviantArt Username: N/A Registration date: 2008-11-18
 | Subject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind Sun Aug 21, 2011 9:57 pm | |
| What is this i don't even ____________________________________________  made by Knux184 We can learn from the past But those days are gone We can hope for the future But there may not be one -Mike Portnoy "A Change of Seasons" |
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Patt Administrator


Number of posts: 12910 Age: 18 NewGrounds Username: Pattiasina24 DeviantArt Username: Pattiasina24 Registration date: 2009-03-28
 | Subject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind Sun Aug 21, 2011 10:27 pm | |
| I personally love this very simplistic type of art. Art doesn't need crazy details to make it enjoyable to the human eye. Art appeals to anyone, and I mean anyone, and this type here, I find cool and very fun to draw. However I can't get this cartoony look, as I'm most impressed by the face in the last one. Each of these are unique in their own way, and each have their flaws that were fixed upon approach each one.
First drawing is very simplistic. Appearing to be a black figure with a gray face, the only thing I think that could make the picture better was if the eyes were bloodshot. That would have made it prime and probably the best here. The only things I don't like about it is the too simplistic shape, the can like shape with every ridged arms and legs. Fingers as well. However, this may just be the characters. The facial expression of the character really does fit him as well. Looking quite nice.
The second one, looks like a coffee cup of some sort. Once again with the unique cartoony look and nice drawing style. The body isn't ridged anymore. the cup shape looks excellent but it seems too short which isn't a problem, just I don't think it should be that short. The one thing I found wrong here was the arm placement in coordination of the up. I think it looks weird for where it is at. The thing I don't like here is the sprinkle like things in the brown (coffee?), it seems too out of place. Almost like confetti or something, should have made it a light brown and make it look like a yummy French Vanilla coffee. Although, still great drawing.
Ah this one, my favorite. The facial expression here really gets me. Looks so cute, harmless and innocent. Very nice eyes as well to achieve that look. The arm that is visible is perfect in every which way. The one thin that was in the previous picture but wasn't as great, is the shading/lighting. The light green here is so perfect, and it's just perfect, I can't say more. Perfect shade, perfect placement perfect everything. The only thing you should have included is dark green around the bottom. This here, is great, it's my favorite.
As I've said, the drawings are awesome, in their own ways. You improved with each as well. I really like this style and I think you could get really good if you continued with it. Continue to practice on and on to hit your true strength. Please, update this whenever possible. I love these drawings. : ) ____________________________________________  [The Return] |
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Granadico Administrator


Number of posts: 10716 Age: 17 Location: On the computer YouTube Username: Granadico NewGrounds Username: N/A DeviantArt Username: N/A Registration date: 2008-11-18
 | Subject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind Sun Aug 21, 2011 11:03 pm | |
| There's the Patt i know, wall o texts all the way <3 ____________________________________________  made by Knux184 We can learn from the past But those days are gone We can hope for the future But there may not be one -Mike Portnoy "A Change of Seasons" |
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Ping Super Spritan


Number of posts: 19783 Age: 17 Location: Madison Wisconsin YouTube Username: TheRealDealAnimator NewGrounds Username: TheRealDealArt DeviantArt Username: TheRealDealArtist Registration date: 2010-09-15
 | Subject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind Mon Aug 22, 2011 4:20 am | |
| Goddamn Patt-- over something traditional and classic as something of art?
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Leo Competition mod


Number of posts: 7645 Age: 15 Location: Brazil YouTube Username: leocartoon1 NewGrounds Username: leocartoon1 DeviantArt Username: leocartoon1YT Registration date: 2009-05-23
 | Subject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind Mon Aug 22, 2011 2:01 pm | |
| Well as a cartoon lover I should give my two cents too.
Your stuff is really well constructed, something I barely see nowadays (today it's just flat flat flat) but yeh
Your hands really need work. The hands weren't constructed so well and they look very wonky. If you haven't already, check out a book called Advanced Animation by Preston Blair. DO IT
There's lots of poses of hands you can try to draw. ____________________________________________ sketchbook - tumblr - deviantART | Sieghart wrote: | Gates to Infinity was literally released very recently and is also a mystery dungeon game It says the word "Height". idc if height means length to you, where I come from height means height, this is a forum, this is a forum post, you have boobs. because worrying about them keeping bug sizes accurate is totally important in a fictional game about satan worshiping animals fighting each other to the death because they were enslaved by their human overlords |
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Tal Sophomore Spritan Lv 4


Number of posts: 3796 Age: 14 Location: i dunno man... YouTube Username: Syncesizer NewGrounds Username: Syncesizer DeviantArt Username: tal9x9 Registration date: 2011-08-20
 | Subject: ha nice Mon Aug 22, 2011 2:19 pm | |
| i enjoy watching those drawings |
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Patt Administrator


Number of posts: 12910 Age: 18 NewGrounds Username: Pattiasina24 DeviantArt Username: Pattiasina24 Registration date: 2009-03-28
 | Subject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind Mon Aug 22, 2011 4:46 pm | |
| They are cool, aren't they. ^^ ____________________________________________  [The Return] |
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Timmy Elementary Spritan Lv 1


Number of posts: 1184 Age: 15 Location: Windsor Ontario, Canada NewGrounds Username: tehtimmy4080 Registration date: 2010-11-08
 | Subject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind Mon Aug 22, 2011 8:15 pm | |
| These drawings are people from a flash crew, the first one is a ninja-can, second taco soup. Yeah third one is the best patt, I agree with pretty much everything you said Something I did earlier,  Everything turned out pretty good except the arms... meh |
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Patt Administrator


Number of posts: 12910 Age: 18 NewGrounds Username: Pattiasina24 DeviantArt Username: Pattiasina24 Registration date: 2009-03-28
 | Subject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind Mon Aug 22, 2011 8:16 pm | |
| Rofl that's excellent. But the left leg and the arms... :S ____________________________________________  [The Return] |
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Timmy Elementary Spritan Lv 1


Number of posts: 1184 Age: 15 Location: Windsor Ontario, Canada NewGrounds Username: tehtimmy4080 Registration date: 2010-11-08
 | Subject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind Mon Aug 22, 2011 8:22 pm | |
| yeah... I agree...
I just added that I agree so this wouldn't be spam lol |
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Patt Administrator


Number of posts: 12910 Age: 18 NewGrounds Username: Pattiasina24 DeviantArt Username: Pattiasina24 Registration date: 2009-03-28
 | Subject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind Mon Aug 22, 2011 9:08 pm | |
| Aren't you a slick fellow. ____________________________________________  [The Return] |
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Timmy Elementary Spritan Lv 1


Number of posts: 1184 Age: 15 Location: Windsor Ontario, Canada NewGrounds Username: tehtimmy4080 Registration date: 2010-11-08
 | Subject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind Sat Nov 12, 2011 12:12 pm | |
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Leo Competition mod


Number of posts: 7645 Age: 15 Location: Brazil YouTube Username: leocartoon1 NewGrounds Username: leocartoon1 DeviantArt Username: leocartoon1YT Registration date: 2009-05-23
 | Subject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind Sat Nov 12, 2011 12:33 pm | |
| Nice. However his left hand has some tangents in it, so I recommend doing some overlap with the fingers. ____________________________________________ sketchbook - tumblr - deviantART | Sieghart wrote: | Gates to Infinity was literally released very recently and is also a mystery dungeon game It says the word "Height". idc if height means length to you, where I come from height means height, this is a forum, this is a forum post, you have boobs. because worrying about them keeping bug sizes accurate is totally important in a fictional game about satan worshiping animals fighting each other to the death because they were enslaved by their human overlords |
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YoshiSonic Preschool Spritan Lv 4


Number of posts: 929 Age: 15 Location: Earth YouTube Username: SonicYoshi9000 NewGrounds Username: YoshiSonic DeviantArt Username: SonicYoshi Registration date: 2010-11-05
 | Subject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind Sat Nov 12, 2011 12:34 pm | |
| | Granadico wrote: | | What is this i don't even |
I hate that phrase ;'( |
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SXR123 Moderator


Number of posts: 8927 Age: 19 Location: The beautiful world of MOBIUS!!! YouTube Username: Sonicxrules123 NewGrounds Username: SXR123 DeviantArt Username: SXR123 Registration date: 2010-03-07
 | Subject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind Sat Nov 12, 2011 1:48 pm | |
| | YoshiSonic wrote: | | Granadico wrote: | | What is this i don't even |
I hate that phrase ;'( |
WHAT ISH DISH I DUN EVEN____________________________________________ ADOPT A CHAO!!(figuratively speaking of course) |
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Granadico Administrator


Number of posts: 10716 Age: 17 Location: On the computer YouTube Username: Granadico NewGrounds Username: N/A DeviantArt Username: N/A Registration date: 2008-11-18
 | Subject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind Sat Nov 12, 2011 1:50 pm | |
| that facial expression is amazing, its so sinister and "ima rape you in the arse" type ____________________________________________  made by Knux184 We can learn from the past But those days are gone We can hope for the future But there may not be one -Mike Portnoy "A Change of Seasons" |
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SXR123 Moderator


Number of posts: 8927 Age: 19 Location: The beautiful world of MOBIUS!!! YouTube Username: Sonicxrules123 NewGrounds Username: SXR123 DeviantArt Username: SXR123 Registration date: 2010-03-07
 | Subject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind Sat Nov 12, 2011 2:16 pm | |
| You wanna see great facial expressions?  ____________________________________________ ADOPT A CHAO!!(figuratively speaking of course) |
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Ping Super Spritan


Number of posts: 19783 Age: 17 Location: Madison Wisconsin YouTube Username: TheRealDealAnimator NewGrounds Username: TheRealDealArt DeviantArt Username: TheRealDealArtist Registration date: 2010-09-15
 | Subject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind Sat Nov 12, 2011 3:31 pm | |
| ^ LAWL!! ... LMFAO wow that is funny. TImMY!!!!! WOOT!! MY NIGGA  !! y u aint on so much anywhore, that is cool.  . The hand is fairly good. |
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Patt Administrator


Number of posts: 12910 Age: 18 NewGrounds Username: Pattiasina24 DeviantArt Username: Pattiasina24 Registration date: 2009-03-28
 | Subject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind Sun Nov 13, 2011 4:09 pm | |
| I see how you added that slight shadow of the bug, but I feel like you should add the shadow of the hand as well to top it off. Otherwise I think it's nice. : ) ____________________________________________  [The Return] |
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Timmy Elementary Spritan Lv 1


Number of posts: 1184 Age: 15 Location: Windsor Ontario, Canada NewGrounds Username: tehtimmy4080 Registration date: 2010-11-08
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Patt Administrator


Number of posts: 12910 Age: 18 NewGrounds Username: Pattiasina24 DeviantArt Username: Pattiasina24 Registration date: 2009-03-28
 | Subject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind Wed Nov 23, 2011 6:59 pm | |
| Well done. ^^ ____________________________________________  [The Return] |
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Leo Competition mod


Number of posts: 7645 Age: 15 Location: Brazil YouTube Username: leocartoon1 NewGrounds Username: leocartoon1 DeviantArt Username: leocartoon1YT Registration date: 2009-05-23
 | Subject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind Wed Nov 23, 2011 6:59 pm | |
| For some reason, the eye lashes on the second drawing aren't following the major forms of the eyes. ____________________________________________ sketchbook - tumblr - deviantART | Sieghart wrote: | Gates to Infinity was literally released very recently and is also a mystery dungeon game It says the word "Height". idc if height means length to you, where I come from height means height, this is a forum, this is a forum post, you have boobs. because worrying about them keeping bug sizes accurate is totally important in a fictional game about satan worshiping animals fighting each other to the death because they were enslaved by their human overlords |
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Timmy Elementary Spritan Lv 1


Number of posts: 1184 Age: 15 Location: Windsor Ontario, Canada NewGrounds Username: tehtimmy4080 Registration date: 2010-11-08
 | Subject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind Sat Dec 17, 2011 9:24 pm | |
|  work in progress |
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Luigiman364 Freshman Spritan Lv 5


Number of posts: 3096 Age: 18 Location: Massachusetts YouTube Username: SuperLuigi150942 NewGrounds Username: SuperLuigi150942
SuperLuigi150942 Registration date: 2010-12-13
 | Subject: Re: Art - of a simplier kind Sat Dec 17, 2011 9:35 pm | |
| ^^ lol nice also The black tube guy I re did into a meme | Spoiler: | | |  |
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