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Jemaster800
Preschool Spritan Lv 3
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Registration date: 2010-03-21
 | | Subject: Short Sonic vs. knuckles Mon Oct 11, 2010 8:00 pm | |
| Here it is beyotch: :3
I need you all to critique this and point out what could've been better. Anyways, Enjoy the flash.
PS: This was going to be a fragment of a series I quit short ago.
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D3Anims
Senior Spritan Lv 4
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Registration date: 2010-09-09
| | Subject: Re: Short Sonic vs. knuckles Mon Oct 11, 2010 8:05 pm | |
| that was absolutely amazing |
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Jemaster800
Preschool Spritan Lv 3
Number of posts: 526
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NewGrounds Username: jemaster794
Registration date: 2010-03-21
| | Subject: Re: Short Sonic vs. knuckles Mon Oct 11, 2010 8:15 pm | |
| | D3Anims wrote: | | that was absolutely amazing |
Thanks man. (: |
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Eric
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Registration date: 2008-10-20
| | Subject: Re: Short Sonic vs. knuckles Mon Oct 11, 2010 8:19 pm | |
| Flawless
The effects however...i know you get a boner for them. But as men we must control our urgest to spam them. ____________________________________________ Watch your ass.  |
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Eric
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| | Subject: Re: Short Sonic vs. knuckles Mon Oct 11, 2010 8:21 pm | |
| Well, there is minor detail.
The sea in the back could have been an actual sea instead of just blue...
And when sonic gets knocked up and he turns, i know flash is gay with curve motion, but it looked too linear and the fact that he turned without going down didn't make much sense. ____________________________________________ Watch your ass. |
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D3Anims
Senior Spritan Lv 4
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| | Subject: Re: Short Sonic vs. knuckles Mon Oct 11, 2010 8:25 pm | |
| lol 1st its flawless then it has many rooms for improvement |
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Jemaster800
Preschool Spritan Lv 3
Number of posts: 526
YouTube Username: jemaster800
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Registration date: 2010-03-21
| | Subject: Re: Short Sonic vs. knuckles Mon Oct 11, 2010 8:32 pm | |
| | Eric wrote: | Well, there is minor detail.
The sea in the back could have been an actual sea instead of just blue...
And when sonic gets knocked up and he turns, i know flash is gay with curve motion, but it looked too linear and the fact that he turned without going down didn't make much sense. |
I blurred the BG so the minuscule MINUSCULE white dots that made it look like a sea dissapeared.
And Yes, indeed, Flash is most homo when it comes to ark motion. And the only reason he turned was because he was hit in the jaw... So he got knocked back AND up.
| Eric wrote: | | The effects however...i know you get a boner for them. But as men we must control our urgest to spam them. |
Ahh yes that part... I was too much of a dick to realize i effect-raped after I did... And I was too much of a lazy bitch to re-do it. |
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Eric
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| | Subject: Re: Short Sonic vs. knuckles Mon Oct 11, 2010 8:50 pm | |
| lol.
Some basic things like gradients are a good substitute, not so shitty but not too over shadowing. ____________________________________________ Watch your ass. |
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Jemaster800
Preschool Spritan Lv 3
Number of posts: 526
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Registration date: 2010-03-21
| | Subject: Re: Short Sonic vs. knuckles Mon Oct 11, 2010 8:54 pm | |
| | Eric wrote: | lol.
Some basic things like gradients are a good substitute, not so shitty but not too over shadowing. |
Yeah, I guess that would've worked. Could've helped me animate drift movement and shit. Anyways, I cancelled this series so I don't think I'll fix that xD |
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Jemaster800
Preschool Spritan Lv 3
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Registration date: 2010-03-21
| | Subject: Re: Short Sonic vs. knuckles Mon Oct 11, 2010 11:35 pm | |
| Updated for less lag and thanks to Eric for noticing for me. :3 |
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EZWheels
Preschool Spritan Lv 1
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Registration date: 2010-09-11
| | Subject: Re: Short Sonic vs. knuckles Mon Oct 11, 2010 11:48 pm | |
| QUESTIONS!  1. How did you do the epic things with the tree's in the background? 2. How did you make that cool blue circle thing? 3. How did you become so god damn amazing? 4. Where did you get your effects? I LOVE THIS ANIMATION! Mostly because no one got hit and flew 100 feet backwards |
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Jemaster800
Preschool Spritan Lv 3
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| | Subject: Re: Short Sonic vs. knuckles Mon Oct 11, 2010 11:51 pm | |
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EZWheels
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| | Subject: Re: Short Sonic vs. knuckles Mon Oct 11, 2010 11:52 pm | |
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Jemaster800
Preschool Spritan Lv 3
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| | Subject: Re: Short Sonic vs. knuckles Mon Oct 11, 2010 11:54 pm | |
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EZWheels
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| | Subject: Re: Short Sonic vs. knuckles Mon Oct 11, 2010 11:58 pm | |
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5h0ck
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| | Subject: Re: Short Sonic vs. knuckles Tue Oct 12, 2010 7:18 pm | |
| nice. you did a good job on sonics true speed.
I looked away for a sec looked back after i heard a bunch of punches and saw knuckles on his ass.(I mean in the beginning of the fight not the end) |
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ragedemonsonic
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| | Subject: Subject: Re: Short Sonic vs. knuckles Mon Mar 18, 2013 2:15 am | |
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Patt
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| | Subject: Re: Short Sonic vs. knuckles Mon Mar 18, 2013 7:32 am | |
| Dat major bump... ^ ____________________________________________  [The Return] |
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SpritingRulez101
Preschool Spritan Lv 1
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| | Subject: Re: Short Sonic vs. knuckles Mon Mar 18, 2013 5:02 pm | |
| This a party for my eyes good job man ^^ |
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Ping
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| | Subject: Re: Short Sonic vs. knuckles Tue Mar 19, 2013 4:33 pm | |
| Lmao. I miss Jemaster and his work. He'd come here on special occasions sometimes. |
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Nathan-5779
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| | Subject: Re: Short Sonic vs. knuckles Wed Mar 20, 2013 5:26 am | |
| Good! you must persevere in fluidity ! You can also add more effects :) |
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SXR123
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| | Subject: Re: Short Sonic vs. knuckles Wed Mar 20, 2013 7:52 am | |
| WHY IN GODS NAME WAS THIS BUMPED. ____________________________________________  ADOPT A CHAO!!(figuratively speaking of course) |
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Ping
Super Spritan
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| | Subject: Re: Short Sonic vs. knuckles Wed Mar 20, 2013 10:43 pm | |
| That's what I want to know. |
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